If I could go back and tell the
founding fathers something, what would it be? Would you say great job! I wouldn't change a bit, or would you scold them for not thinking ahead. Did you
really expect to make it there with no problems? If you could go back in time,
to when the colony’s were still being established, what would you tell them?
One
thing I would ask our founding fathers would be to ask them if they expected to
survive with no doctors, barely enough food, and little knowledge on how to
find your own food? Almost half of the colonists died from natural causes such
as sickness or too little food. When people got sick, there were no medicines
and very few doctors to treat them so they just died. How did you plan on surviving is my
question.
While
not being prepared was a big problem, I think slavery is a bigger problem.
Wasn’t the whole point of the “new country” to have been freedom? If so, then
why did you wait 100 years before you abolished slavery? Many slaves died from
harsh treatment from their “owners”. I don’t know what freedom means to them,
but to me it means not having someone own you. I feel like that was not the
smartest idea to keep slavery.
While
some things were really bad, there many things that you did mostly right. Like
creating voting rights. This way when you created laws, everyone got to share
their opinion. This way the United States of America created their government.
I think you did an astounding job of it and it is still more or less the
same. One thing you could have changed
was having women’s rights but I wouldn’t put yourself down on that one because
it was shortly resolved.
All in
all I think you did a pretty great job of founding our country and I realize
that everything isn’t going to be perfect and you coped way better than anyone
else would have done while under all that stress. I look up to you for doing
what you did because I know that I wouldn’t be able to start even a business
with all of the courage or
insightfulness that you had and may you rest in peace.
I like your essay! You clearly explained why you would tell the Founding Fathers something. The only thing I would add a more interesting title (Mrs. Reagles will like that :D)
ReplyDeleteThat was really good! I loved how you actually persuaded the reader's that you were really talking to the founding fathers. I also like how you said some solutions to the problems you thought of. Other than that your grammar and word choice is really good!
ReplyDelete-Meghan